quarta-feira, dezembro 16, 2009

Hard feelings - P.L.

ships, ships,
and other relationships,
keep us going
through the fog
and wandering mist
What is it
that I missed?

Um comentário:

Mensageiro Literário disse...

Maybe it was not missed as you say. It can be burried inside as Cecília Meireles said once "Pus o meu sonho num navio" ...read this poem.
I believe sometimes people fight to don't find things inside themselves.
Even hard and sorrowful, you write with a delicate sound and rhythm.